hey guys this is another one of those amazing pobble story so the one is called save our habitat which means save our earth from pollution and cutting down all of the trees that have been around for century because us people would not have much air to breath and from now on we should put our rubbish in the bin instead of putting it in the sea .
Hey Raymond.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chloe and I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.
Well done! This is a very interesting blog post you have done. It's very sad how they go around and cut all of the trees. Make sure there is no more 1 'and' in your sentence or just use commas instead of 'and'.
also make sure you use a capital 'I' because I did notice there was a lowercase 'I', it's all okay but it's improves your writing if you do use uppercase. When you did your questions/answers maybe next time you could explain your answers so then we know why you chose that word.
Well done!
Kind regards
- Chloe