I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
Hello Raymond, It is Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model school/ Rimu class. This blog post stood out to me because you gave a discription and you also added some pictures. I think that you are missing a few things. To start off with you could probaly try exsplaing a bit more. As well as re-reading your blogs before you post them. You could also try to Add a more catchy title. Was this set work from the teacher of did you just do this for fun? Other than that Ka Pai Bridget
Hello Raymond,
ReplyDeleteIt is Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model school/ Rimu class. This blog post stood out to me because you gave a discription and you also added some pictures. I think that you are missing a few things. To start off with you could probaly try exsplaing a bit more. As well as re-reading your blogs before you post them.
You could also try to Add a more catchy title. Was this set work from the teacher of did you just do this for fun?
Other than that
Ka Pai
Bridget