What up guys this piece of writing is one of the first writing ever and its called the Scissors Island which is pretty crazy and like what theeeeeeeeee heck !!!! .
And yeah just annoy that face over there ⇉⇉⇉⇉⇉⇉⇉⇉⇉⇉⇉⇉
But anyway i really hope you enjoyed my story .
Hi Raymound,
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Wow was this funny. It's so random, I'm still trying to understand what it's about. I showed this to my freind and we were struggling to laugh quietly since the teachers were there and the class was in silence. If you were ment to make it as funny as I found it, you've achieved it.
The reference, 'of my chiny chin chin' reminded me of my class learning about how to write Traditional Fairy Tales. We've learnt things like traditional language and we've even wrote about the billy goat gruffs framing the troll and were actually trespassing on the bridge. That was fun.
This was very entertaining to read but you may need to cheack your punctuation. I also would say to make your blog more colorful but I think your simplistic design along with the image matches with your writing. What did your teacher think of it? Hope to see your next post!
By Mika
Link to Blog:http://ymsmika.blogspot.com/
Hello, RayMond I am Jacob From Yaldhurst Model School I really enjoyed reading your blog post. This looks really awesome. I like that you put that funny face in your blog post it looks funny. I really enjoyed reading your story what you did I hope you had fun doing that. Well bye.
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