Raymond , Quality Blog Commenting

                                                              Quality blog commenting


hi there today i am going to tall you what i did today a teacher named ms collines came and gave us a google doc for our work but on the screen it had this chart that had these three word that are

.THOUGHTFUL
.HELPFUL
.POSITIVE
the three main words that people can use when you are doing a comment for someone on the
blogger . but you cant just saying it for fun you have to be honest to others around you and
online with people but like online just because you don't see them in real life that doesn't mean
you can lie to them and beside they might live right next door to you when your talking all that
     right but yeah commenting can be bad like , oh you suck you should stop blogging or make vids so yeah ,
but that is just TOOOOO overdoad / or like you can say something great , or good or inspiring for other 

The word encourage

                                                                 encourage


encourage word means something kind and nice caring .
like for an example if someone fall off the playground they might
feel sorry  for them self but the word encourage existed you can go up to them
and make them feel good about themself and he or she can feel like they
can do it  .

And for another example if someone was on a team for a rugby team
your friend can come over and make you feel good and even
you don't have to worry about any bad things  .

the word encourage
can build friendship with others
and showing kia mananui to others that
feel sad , or mad , or stressed out about something .

Christchurch news

                                           
                                                           CHRISTCHURCH
in the bottom of new Zealand there was 49 people how lost there lives and some died and some in the hospital still badly hurt . it was because there was a moorland person
it was because of the race skin colour and different couture and different . and we are there to
support the people who there family
or friends that died or lost there lives .

      

The K.W.L Polynesians .

                      

 This is our  K.W,L  learning tasks and this is all
about the Polynesians travelling around the pacific
and voyaging around the land.
this was S.A.M.R that did this work together to share about the what we learn about
the video we all watch on you tube . This is the task That we did called
the K.W.L 
\ and did you know about the Polynesians use to fish about 4000 mm or more mm away
from the land .  thank you for reading .   


                                                             

My Bio Poem

This all about me like everything about me . and this is a bio poem . this explain all the
things that happen in my life . with my bio poem people can learn more
about me and can understand me .

The Kuri Dog Raymond

  . THIS WEEK  i have been reading a text about a extinction kuri dog that has been us for great things like with clothing and eating if people are really really hungry or go call there dogs to go hunting for some food . but sometime there owners kill them for hurting there owners sheep and pigs.


 . THE KEY IDEAS is extinction . the dogs were always sometime hunted , died , and even eaten , and shaved , left behind by there owners . there owners would shaved the kuri dogs skin to help them keep warm and protection to keep them strong , and left behind because there were a bet slow or forgotten or even got lost n the trees . died the far mas killed there kuri dogs because there were afraid of the kuri dog


. AND EXAMPLE if the dogs were not extinct there will be one of the best hunting dog . but the people search for the kuri dogs but there were none of there kind left around . and even later the Maori people thought they ate more fish then dog but they ate more dogs than fish but a scientists named DR PRISCILLA she was the one that discovered about the kuri dogs that she know that the kuri dogs were extinct .


. AN A OTHER KEY IDEA is bravery .  the bravery of the dog is hunting and even strength and sacrifice to be eaten for there owners . and it is very strong for a NZ Maori dog that can hunt down anything that it tracks down and even there are very fury/or harry for a dog .
 

All About the story , KURI

This is the story of the kuri dog that is a very great hunting dog
that its extinct and more of its kind left but there owners use to kill them 
for there skin to cover them self and use to eat them and use to use them for hunting . and this is
made by ,Tim , I , and me Raymond , 

cooking curry curry .

                                                                  Cooking class
Today my buddy lop pi and i have been cooking curry . but it was lentil curry . it was very hard and we kinda mess up with purring the carrot with the onion and even it was very very hot hot like burning so yea that was our cooking Thursday .


. dice and slice the onion
. fry it until it is soft
. add garlic and ginger with the curry
. stir for 5 minutes
. add spinach
. add the cream with spices even salt .
. serve it with rice
. clean up

but with lop i we made the the lentil curry together with just us two .

Cooking in Tamaki collage

                                                   Cooking class

In the morning at tamaki college i went to cooking class and i had a partner that help me

                  Making pads trying to make a burger . And also we were split

                   

Like year 8 on the other side and year 7 on the other side and we all made a complete

       

                                              Different food ingredient .